This is Hannah and my own production of "The Prisoner."
Whilst shooting we expercienced problems such as bad camera skills and lack of camera angles so when we shoot our own video we will overcome these by adding a wider variety of camera angles and a better camera woman. In this film you can see a couple of continuity errors that can be overcome with more time put into editing and timing. Overall I think that this is a good video for a first attempt but with more editing and more camera angles, we could make it a lot better.
Your video is very inventive, particularly your use of titles, and has an interesting mood about it. You use a range of shots, which is commendable. Some odd transitions (normally you'd only use fades to denote passage of time). I would try to avoid using too many pans, since this looks a little unplanned (and makes the audience a little dizzy!). There is a classic 180 degree mismatch at 33s. Watch your framing; ideally, you want your subject to be at the centre of your shot.
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